Re: [Gen-art] [taugh.com-standards] Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dcrup-dkim-crypto-12

Alexey Melnikov <aamelnikov@fastmail.fm> Thu, 21 June 2018 14:30 UTC

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From: Alexey Melnikov <aamelnikov@fastmail.fm>
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Cc: Pete Resnick <presnick@qti.qualcomm.com>, General Area Review Team <gen-art@ietf.org>, dcrup@ietf.org, draft-ietf-dcrup-dkim-crypto.all@ietf.org, rsalz@akamai.com, Murray Kucherawy <superuser@gmail.com>, alexey.melnikov@isode.com, ben@nostrum.com, adam@nostrum.com, fenton@bluepopcorn.net
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [taugh.com-standards] Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dcrup-dkim-crypto-12
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Hi John,

On Wed, Jun 20, 2018, at 8:38 PM, John R. Levine wrote:
> > Pete, thanks for your review. I think the whole point of chartering DCRUP was to produce documents such as this.
> > John, thanks for updating to reference RFC 8174, although I agree with Adam that the boilerplate should match 8174.
> 
> It's fixed in the copy I have here, waiting to see what other nits to 
> fix show up in LC before posting the final.

Please post a new revision. The document is approved pending a new revision (or an email from you saying that none is needed).

Thank you,
Alexey

> By the way, there are comments in the XML pointing out the stuff to 
> remove, which have been there all along.