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Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com> Tue, 09 October 2018 05:33 UTC

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From: Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com>
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Document: draft-ietf-httpbis-rand-access-live-03
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2018-10-08
IETF LC End Date: NA
IESG Telechat date: 2018-10-12

Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Experimental Track RFC .

Major issues:
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
-[Page 5], "accessable"--->"accessible"
-[Page 5], "providing a"---->"providing an"

Best Regards,
Meral
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Meral Shirazipour
Ericsson Research
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