Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-virtual-eth-segment-08
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From: "Patrice Brissette (pbrisset)" <pbrisset@cisco.com>
To: Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com>, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>
CC: "bess@ietf.org" <bess@ietf.org>, "draft-ietf-bess-evpn-virtual-eth-segment.all@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-bess-evpn-virtual-eth-segment.all@ietf.org>, "last-call@ietf.org" <last-call@ietf.org>
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Hi Meral, Thanks again for your review. Please see v10 capturing the outcome of the discussion below. Regards, Patrice Brissette, Distinguished Engineer, Cisco Systems From: Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com> Date: Monday, May 1, 2023 at 11:07 To: Patrice Brissette <pbrisset@cisco.com> Subject: Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-virtual-eth-segment-08 Hi, thank you looks good to me, please reply to the list as well once you update the draft. Best Regards, Meral From: Patrice Brissette (pbrisset) <pbrisset@cisco.com> Date: Monday, May 1, 2023 at 6:58 AM To: Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com> Subject: Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-virtual-eth-segment-08 Hey Meral, Thanks for the review. Will the following address your comment: "An Ethernet-Segment, as defined in RFC7432, represents a set of Ethernet links connecting customer site to one or more PE. The concept is extended to covered virtual Ethernet connectivity. An ES can be associated to Ethernet links like EVC (e.g. VLANs)." Regards, Patrice Brissette, Distinguished Engineer, Cisco Systems On 2023-04-24, 19:34, "Meral Shirazipour via Datatracker" <noreply@ietf.org <mailto:noreply@ietf.org>> wrote: Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>>. Document: draft-ietf-bess-evpn-virtual-eth-segment-08 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2023-04-24 IETF LC End Date: 2023-04-27 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: This draft is almost ready to be published as Standard RFC, no other comments than those on the list. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: -Section 1 , "This document extends the Ethernet Segment concept so that an ES can be associated to a set of EVCs (e.g., VLANs) or other objects such as MPLS Label Switch Paths (LSPs) or Pseudowires (PWs), referred to as Virtual Ethernet Segments (vES)." & Section 1.1 It would be great to add a sentence on why we need this and what is the current alternative. -[Page 20], Section 5.4, "large numbe of "--->"large number of "
- [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-b… Meral Shirazipour via Datatracker
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