Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-sakane-dhc-dhcpv6-kdc-option-14.txt

Alexey Melnikov <alexey.melnikov@isode.com> Tue, 17 July 2012 10:37 UTC

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Cc: Masahiro Ishiyama <masahiro@isl.rdc.toshiba.co.jp>, General Area Review Team <gen-art@ietf.org>, Stephen Farrell <stephen.farrell@cs.tcd.ie>, Jeffrey Hutzelman <jhutz@cmu.edu>
Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art review of draft-sakane-dhc-dhcpv6-kdc-option-14.txt
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On 12/05/2012 03:03, ssakane wrote:
> Alexey,
Hi Shoichi,
Sorry, I've missed this email earlier. I just reviewed -17 and it is a 
big improvement. I am more or less happy with it.

> Thank you for your review and comments.
>
> Firstly, I really apologize that my response has been delayed.
> I had some other deadlines last months.
>
> We totally agreed that the section 4 and 5 should be improved
> to explain strictly the operations of both client and server.
> Please wait for submitting new version in few weeks.
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