Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6833bis-24

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Wed, 06 February 2019 22:01 UTC

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From: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6833bis-24
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Pete, thank you for your reviews of this document. Dino, thank you for addressing Pete’s comment. I have entered a No Objection ballot.

Alissa

> On Feb 5, 2019, at 9:43 PM, Pete Resnick <resnick@episteme.net>; wrote:
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> Reviewer: Pete Resnick
> Review result: Ready with Nits
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> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> Document: draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6833bis-24
> Reviewer: Pete Resnick
> Review Date: 2019-02-05
> IETF LC End Date: 2018-08-31
> IESG Telechat date: 2019-02-07
> 
> Summary:
> 
> The changes made to this version look fine to me. No concerns save the editorial comment below.
> 
> Major issues: None.
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> Minor issues: None.
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> Nits/editorial comments: Section 2: Get rid of everything except the last paragraph.
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