[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-kucherawy-marf-source-ports-03

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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
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Document: draft-kucherawy-marf-source-ports-03
Reviewer: David L. Black
Review Date: May 15, 2012
IETF LC End Date: June 4, 2012

This is a short draft that adds source ports to the Abuse Reporting Format for mail abuse reporting.

This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication.

Major issues: None.

Minor issues: None.

Nits/editorial comments:

  In section 3, please summarize what the "CFWS" ABNF element represents (comments and folding white space).

  Typo in last paragraph of section 3: "RECOMMENED" -> "RECOMMENDED"

  idnits 2.12.13 didn't find anything that requires attention.

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