[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-kucherawy-marf-source-ports-03

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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
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Document: draft-kucherawy-marf-source-ports-03
Reviewer: David L. Black
Review Date: May 15, 2012
IETF LC End Date: June 4, 2012

This is a short draft that adds source ports to the Abuse Reporting Format for mail abuse reporting.

Summary:
This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication.

Major issues: None.

Minor issues: None.

Nits/editorial comments:

  In section 3, please summarize what the "CFWS" ABNF element represents (comments and folding white space).

  Typo in last paragraph of section 3: "RECOMMENED" -> "RECOMMENDED"

  idnits 2.12.13 didn't find anything that requires attention.

Thanks,
--David
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