[Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-vpws-10
Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com> Mon, 06 March 2017 09:46 UTC
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Reviewer: Roni Even Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-bess-evpn-vpws-?? Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date: 2017-03-06 IETF LC End Date: 2017-03-10 IESG Telechat date: 2017-04-13 Summary: The document is ready for publication as Standard track RFC Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: In general lack some abbreviations expansions. just a few 1. In the abstract EVPN and PW 2. ASBR 3. In section 2 the reference to RFC7432 is not a link in the HTML and PDF. The link is working in the other places the reference appears.