[Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-lisp-alt-09.txt

Suresh Krishnan <suresh.krishnan@ericsson.com> Tue, 11 October 2011 22:25 UTC

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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for
draft-ietf-lisp-alt-09.txt

For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
<http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html>.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Experimental RFC, but
please consider fixing a minor text issue.

Minor
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* The IPv6 default route is represented in the draft as "0::/0". It
should be represented as "::/0" .

Thanks
Suresh