Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-cdni-metadata-18

Kevin Ma J <kevin.j.ma@ericsson.com> Tue, 28 June 2016 16:38 UTC

From: Kevin Ma J <kevin.j.ma@ericsson.com>
To: Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com>, "draft-ietf-cdni-metadata.all@tools.ietf.org" <draft-ietf-cdni-metadata.all@tools.ietf.org>, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>
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Hi Meral,

  Thanks for the review.  We will fix the typos in the next revision.

> Question: The $ character is not described. What does $$ mean if $? is the one character match?

  The "$" is the escape character, so "$$" allows the use of an actual dollar sign in the text.  Will add clarification text.

> General, does the "MI" prefix stand for "Metadata Interface"?

  Correct, MI stands for Metadata Interface.  The convention has been to prefix the payload types with the interface abbreviation.

thanx!

--  Kevin J. Ma

From: Meral Shirazipour [mailto:meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com]
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Subject: Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-cdni-metadata-18

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
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Document: draft-ietf-cdni-metadata-18
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2016-06-27
IETF LC End Date:  2016-06-27
IESG Telechat date: 2016-07-07


Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some comments.

Major issues:

Minor issues:


Nits/editorial comments:
-[Page 19]:
"
Property: pattern
         Description: A pattern for string matching.  The pattern can
         contain the wildcards * and ?, where * matches any sequence of
         characters (including the empty string) and ? matches exactly
         one character.  The three literals $, * and ? should be escaped
         as $$, $* and $?. All other characters are treated as literals.
"

Question: The $ character is not described. What does $$ mean if $? is the one character match?


-[Page 20], section 4.1.6,
"to evaulate"--typo-->"to evaluate"
"is specifed"--typo-->"is specified"

-[Page 24], section 4.2.1.1
"objecct,"--typo-->"object,"

-[Page 50-54], sections 7.1.1 to 7.1.20
"capabilitiy"--typo?-->"capability" (many times)

-General, does the "MI" prefix stand for "Metadata Interface"?

Best Regards,
Meral
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Meral Shirazipour
Ericsson Research
www.ericsson.com<http://www.ericsson.com>

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-i… Jari Arkko
Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-i… Meral Shirazipour
Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-i… Kevin Ma J
[Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-… Meral Shirazipour