[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Call review of draft-ietf-mile-rolie-10
Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com> Fri, 13 October 2017 21:38 UTC
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From: Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com>
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Call review of draft-ietf-mile-rolie-10
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-mile-rolie-10 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2017-10-13 IETF LC End Date: 2017-10-13 IESG Telechat date: 2017-10-26 Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards RFC . Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: -[Page 13], "handling of collections ealier "--->"handling of collections earlier " -Please spell out IRI (Internationalized Resource Identifiers) at first use Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com
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