Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-simple-chat-13.txt
"Miguel A. Garcia" <Miguel.A.Garcia@ericsson.com> Tue, 21 February 2012 11:19 UTC
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-simple-chat-13.txt
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Hi Suresh, Thanks for your review. Please see inline answers. On 20/02/2012 16:02, Suresh Krishnan wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for > draft-ietf-simple-chat-13.txt > > For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at > <http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html>. > > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments > you may receive. > > Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard but > I have a few comments. > > Section 3: > > REQ-3: It is unclear why this is separate from REQ-2. In my reading, > REQ-2 already covers REQ-3. OK, makes sense. We can merge these requirements. > > Section 6.1 > > This sentence is not clear. Can you clarify/reword. > > "Having the header of the Message/CPIM wrapper only in the first chunk, > the MSRP switch MUST track the Message-Id until the last chunk of the > message has been distributed." Ok, we will clarify it. Thanks, Miguel > > Thanks > Suresh > > > > > > > > > > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > Gen-art@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art > -- Miguel A. Garcia +34-91-339-3608 Ericsson Spain
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-simple-cha… Suresh Krishnan
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-simple… Gonzalo Camarillo
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-simple… Miguel A. Garcia