[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-6tisch-6top-protocol-10
Brian Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> Sun, 11 March 2018 03:11 UTC
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Reviewer: Brian Carpenter Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-6tisch-6top-protocol-10 Reviewer: Brian Carpenter Review Date: 2018-03-10 IETF LC End Date: 2018-03-26 IESG Telechat date: 2018-04-05 Summary: Ready Comment: Most of my previous comments have been fixed, thanks. I still disagree with the authors on one point, but not enough to delay the draft: In section 3.1.1 "2-step 6P Transaction" there seems to be a rare race condition if A's timeout expires while B's Response is in flight. This will be detected later as an inconsistency (section 3.4.6.2). The authors don't think it's necessary to mention this in 3.1.1. IMHO it would be useful to mention. (Similarly for section 3.1.2, 3-step transaction.)
- [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-6… Brian Carpenter
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Xavi Vilajosana Guillen
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Brian E Carpenter
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Brian E Carpenter
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Alissa Cooper
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Xavi Vilajosana Guillen