[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-kitten-rfc5653bis-06
Joel Halpern <jmh@joelhalpern.com> Tue, 02 January 2018 23:30 UTC
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Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-kitten-rfc5653bis-06 Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review Date: 2018-01-02 IETF LC End Date: 2017-09-11 IESG Telechat date: 2018-01-25 Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard RFC Major issues: None Minor issues: Although ID-Nits does not complain about it, I can find no reference to RFCs 2119 or 8174. Some of the uses of "must" int he document are along the lines of "inherently follows", which is not normative language. But other uses are clearly normative in structure. It is unclear why the reference to RFC 2119 was removed as part of this update. Nits/editorial comments:
- [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-ki… Joel Halpern
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-iet… Benjamin Kaduk
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-iet… Joel M. Halpern
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-iet… Weijun Wang
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-iet… Joel M. Halpern
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-iet… Benjamin Kaduk
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-iet… Weijun Wang
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-iet… Alissa Cooper
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-iet… Weijun Wang
- Re: [Gen-art] [kitten] Genart telechat review of … Greg Hudson
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- Re: [Gen-art] [kitten] Genart telechat review of … Greg Hudson
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- Re: [Gen-art] [kitten] Genart telechat review of … Weijun Wang
- Re: [Gen-art] [kitten] Genart telechat review of … Benjamin Kaduk
- Re: [Gen-art] [kitten] Genart telechat review of … Benjamin Kaduk
- Re: [Gen-art] [kitten] Genart telechat review of … Greg Hudson
- Re: [Gen-art] [kitten] Genart telechat review of … Benjamin Kaduk
- Re: [Gen-art] [kitten] Genart telechat review of … Weijun Wang
- Re: [Gen-art] [kitten] Genart telechat review of … Benjamin Kaduk
- Re: [Gen-art] [kitten] Genart telechat review of … Weijun Wang