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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you
may receive.

Document:  draft-ietf-appsawg-multipart-form-data-08

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date:2015-4-3

IETF LC End Date: 2015-4-6

IESG Telechat date: 

 

Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as an Standard Track
RFC.

 

 

Major issues:

 

Minor issues:

 

In the IANA considerations I think you missed to mention the Content
Disposition Vlaues form-data

See  <http://www.iana.org/assignments/cont-disp/cont-disp.xhtml>
http://www.iana.org/assignments/cont-disp/cont-disp.xhtml 

 

 

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name=3D"OLE_LINK1"></a><a name=3D"OLE_LINK2">I am the assigned Gen-ART =
reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ =
at &lt;</a><a =
href=3D"http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq" =
target=3D"_blank">http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq=
</a>&gt;.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=3DMsoNormal>Please resolve these =
comments along with any other Last Call comments you may =
receive.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=3DMsoPlainText><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Document:&n=
bsp; </span><span style=3D'font-family:"Courier =
New"'>draft-ietf-appsawg-multipart-form-data-08</span><o:p></o:p></p><p =
class=3DMsoPlainText><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Reviewer: =
Roni Even<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoPlainText><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Review =
Date:2015&#8211;4-3<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoPlainText><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>IETF LC =
End Date: 2015&#8211;4-6<o:p></o:p></span></p><p =
class=3DMsoPlainText><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>IESG =
Telechat date: <o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoPlainText><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p>&nbsp;=
</o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoPlainText><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Summary: =
This draft is almost ready for publication as an Standard Track&nbsp; =
RFC</span><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>.<o:p></o:p=
></span></p><p class=3DMsoPlainText><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p>&nbsp;=
</o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoPlainText><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p>&nbsp;=
</o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoPlainText><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Major =
issues:<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoPlainText><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p>&nbsp;=
</o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoPlainText><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Minor =
issues:<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoPlainText><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p>&nbsp;=
</o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoPlainText><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>In the =
IANA considerations I think you missed to mention the Content =
Disposition Vlaues form-data<o:p></o:p></span></p><p =
class=3DMsoPlainText><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>See =
</span><a =
href=3D"http://www.iana.org/assignments/cont-disp/cont-disp.xhtml"><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>http://www.=
iana.org/assignments/cont-disp/cont-disp.xhtml</span></a><span =
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<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoPlainText><span =
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</o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoPlainText><span =
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</o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoNormal>Nits/editorial =
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