[Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-teas-mpls-tp-rsvpte-ext-associated-lsp-07

Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com> Wed, 11 March 2015 18:09 UTC

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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-teas-mpls-tp-rsvpte-ext-associated-lsp-07
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
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This review is in response to a request for early Gen-ART review.

Document: draft-ietf-teas-mpls-tp-rsvpte-ext-associated-lsp-07
Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review Date: 2015-02-12
IETF LC End Date: 2015-02-23
IESG Telechat date: 2015-03-12

Summary:  Ready


Major Concerns:  None


Minor Concerns:  None


Other Comments:  Thanks for improving the structure of section 2 based on
my previous review.