Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-p2mp-12

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Thu, 11 April 2019 12:56 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-p2mp-12
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David, thanks for your review. Adrian, thanks for your response. I entered a No Objection ballot.

Alissa

> On Mar 12, 2019, at 7:13 PM, Adrian Farrel <adrian@olddog.co.uk> wrote:
> 
> Thanks David,
> 
> Subject experts we have. Your review of readability etc. was most welcome.
> 
> Adrian
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: David Schinazi via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> 
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> Subject: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-p2mp-12
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> Reviewer: David Schinazi
> Review result: Ready
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
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> Document: draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-p2mp-12
> Reviewer: David Schinazi
> Review Date: 2019-03-12
> IETF LC End Date: 2019-03-20
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Summary: I am not knowledgeable in this domain so this review
> only focused on style. Document reads nicely, is well ordered
> and defines its terminology clearly. Looks great from a form perspective.
> 
> Major issues: None
> 
> Minor issues: None
> 
> Nits/editorial comments: None
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