Re: [Gen-art] [lamps] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lamps-cmp-updates-18

Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com> Sun, 15 May 2022 23:13 UTC

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From: Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [lamps] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lamps-cmp-updates-18
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As stated in the shepherd writeup:

  When this update was started, the number of updates was expected to
  be smaller.  It is recognized that complex update documents place a
  burden on implementers.  So, when LAMPS WG tries to progress CMP to
  Internet Standard, a bis document will be produced to combine the
  base specification and the updates.

Russ

> On May 14, 2022, at 11:43 PM, Linda Dunbar via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
> Review result: Ready
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
> 
> For more information, please see the FAQ at
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> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
> 
> Document: draft-ietf-lamps-cmp-updates-18
> Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
> Review Date: 2022-05-14
> IETF LC End Date: 2022-05-11
> IESG Telechat date: 2022-06-02
> 
> Summary:
> This document describes the changes to the Certificate Management protocol and
> explains why the changes are needed. The description is very clear.
> 
> Major issues: None
> 
> Minor issues: None
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> Will the updated CMP be published as a whole? instead of requiring readers to
> refer to multiple RFCs?
> 
> Thanks, Linda Dunbar
> 
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