[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-tictoc-1588v2-yang-10

Linda Dunbar <Linda.dunbar@huawei.com> Fri, 21 September 2018 21:27 UTC

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Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-tictoc-1588v2-yang-??
Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review Date: 2018-09-21
IETF LC End Date: 2018-09-07
IESG Telechat date: 2018-10-11

Summary:

The updated revision (10) has addressed all my comments to the draft-ietf-tictoc-1588v2-yang-09. 
Thank authors for updating the draft promptly. 

Linda

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