Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-mpls-sfc-encapsulation-03

"Andrew G. Malis" <agmalis@gmail.com> Thu, 28 February 2019 15:47 UTC

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Date: Thu, 28 Feb 2019 10:46:57 -0500
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-mpls-sfc-encapsulation-03
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Meral,

Thanks for your review! I've fixed that typo in the next revision.

Cheers,
Andy


On Mon, Feb 25, 2019 at 2:02 PM Meral Shirazipour <
meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com>; wrote:

> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review
> Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for
> the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call
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> Document: draft-ietf-mpls-sfc-encapsulation-03
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> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
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> Review Date: 2019-02-25
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> IETF LC End Date: 2019-02-26
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> IESG Telechat date: NA
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> Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Informational RFC, no
> other comments than those already addressed on the mailing list.
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> Major issues:
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> Minor issues:
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> Nits/editorial comments:
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> -[Page 3], Section 2, "SFF (i.e, " -----> "SFF (i.e., "
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> Best Regards,
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> Meral
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> Meral Shirazipour
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> Ericsson Research
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