Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-geopriv-dhcp-lbyr-uri-option-15

Alexey:

The telechat is less that 24 hours away.  I hope you are online and can reply soon.

Russ

On Feb 4, 2013, at 2:01 PM, Russ Housley wrote:

> Alexey:
> 
> I have not seen a reply to this review.  Are your concerns resolved in the current version?
> 
> Russ
> 
> On Jun 9, 2012, at 12:47 PM, Alexey Melnikov wrote:
> 
>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
>> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
>> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
>> 
>> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
>> you may receive.
>> 
>> Document: draft-ietf-geopriv-dhcp-lbyr-uri-option-15
>> Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov
>> Review Date: 2012-06-09
>> IETF LC End Date: 2012-06-14
>> IESG Telechat date: (if known)
>> 
>> Summary: This document is nearly ready for publication as a Proposed Standard.
>> 
>> Major issues: None
>> 
>> Minor issues:
>> 
>> In Section 1: the first reference to URI needs a Normative reference. The whole document is about passing URIs and they are not defined anywhere.
>> 
>> In Section 2.3: LuriType =1 description says that the value is UTF-8. This is not correct, URIs never contain non-ASCII values. So please either say ASCII, or use IRI if you really meant UTF-8 (but use of IRIs would be horrible, so don't).
>> 
>> LuriType=2: in network byte order?
>> 
>> In Section 3.2: "data:" URI needs an Informative reference (RFC 2397).
>> 
>> In Section 3.3: all media types mentioned (two?) need Normative references.
>> 
>> 
>> Nits/editorial comments:
>> 
>> In Section 3, 2nd to the last para: s/deference/dereference ?
>> 
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