[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-payload-rtp-ttml-03

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Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-payload-rtp-ttml-03
Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review Date: 2019-10-11
IETF LC End Date: 2019-10-10
IESG Telechat date: 2019-10-17


Thank you for addressing my comments on the previous version of this
Internet-Draft.


Summary: Ready with Nits

Major Concerns:

None.


Minor Concerns:

None.


Nits:

My guess is that the second paragraph in Section 7.1 uses "should"
because it is asking implementors to think about these things when
selecting a clock rate.  I expected this section to be talking about
the payload format parameters, not implementation considerations.  I
am not sure, but this paragraph might be more impactful elsewhere.  

In section 4.2.1.1 and 4.2.1.2.1.2, should the blocks of XML be
enclosed between '<CODE BEGINS>' and '<CODE ENDS>' lines to make it
very clear that the Simplified BSD License applies here?