[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-roll-minrank-hysteresis-of-10.txt

"Miguel A. Garcia" <Miguel.A.Garcia@ericsson.com> Tue, 08 May 2012 07:28 UTC

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Document: draft-ietf-roll-minrank-hysteresis-of-10.txt
Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <Miguel.A.Garcia@ericsson.com>
Review Date: 2012-05-08
IESG Telechat date: 2012-05-10

Summary: The document is ready for publication as a standards track RFC

Major issues: none

Minor issues: none

Nits/editorial comments:

I reviewed version -07 of this document. At that time, I had a few 
editorial comments, and all of them but one have been addressed in 
version -10. The comment that has not been address is included here again 
for your consideration:

- Section 3.1. Towards the end of the section, the sentence reads:

    The path cost corresponding to a neighbor SHOULD be re-computed each

and then there are 3 conditions numbered from 1 to 3. It is not clear if 
the path cost should be recomputed when all of the 3 conditions are met, 
or when any of the 3 conditions are met. In other words, it is not clear 
if the 3 bullet points are an "AND" or an "OR" operation among then. 
Presumably they are an "OR". If this is the case, perhaps the sentence 
should be rephrased as:

    The path cost corresponding to a neighbor SHOULD be re-computed each
    time any of the following conditions are met:

Miguel A. Garcia
Ericsson Spain