Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-mediactrl-6231-iana-00.txt

Eric Burger <eburger@standardstrack.com> Wed, 07 March 2012 19:35 UTC

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Good catch! Thanks for the review. Will definitely fix in AUTH48.

On Mar 7, 2012, at 12:08 PM, Alexey Melnikov wrote:

> I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
> reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>
> 
> Please resolve these comments along with any other comments you may receive.
> 
> Document: draft-ietf-mediactrl-6231-iana-00.txt
> Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov
> Review Date: 2012-03-07	
> IETF LC End Date: 2012-03-08
> IESG Telechat date: 2012-03-15
> 
> Summary: The document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard RFC
> 
> Major issues: none
> 
> Minor issues: none
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> 
> 
>   | 433   | Unsupported   | the request contains  | RFC6231           |
>   |       | collect and   | <collect> and         |                   |
>   |       | record        | <record> elements and |                   |
>   |       | capability    | the MS does support   |                   |
> 
> "does support" --> "does not support" ?
> 
>   |       |               | these operations      |                   |
>   |       |               | simultaneously        |                   |
>