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"Matt Miller (mamille2)" <mamille2@cisco.com> Thu, 02 June 2016 14:23 UTC

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From: "Matt Miller (mamille2)" <mamille2@cisco.com>
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I am the coincidentally-assigned Gen-ART and SecDir reviewer
for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF
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Document: draft-ietf-avtext-splicing-notification-07
Reviewer: Matthew A. Miller
Review Date: 2016-06-02
IETF LC End Date: 2016-06-01
IESG Telechat date: N/A

Summary:

This document is ready to be published as a Proposed Standard
once the nit is taken care of.

I reviewed a previous revision of this document (-04), and all of my
concerns from the earlier review are addressed herein.

I note this document includes normative references to two Informational
documents (RFCs 7201 and 7667).  The references are important to
properly understand some of the security considerations of this
document, but it appears the responsible AD is to add them to the
approved downrefs registry.


Major issues: N/A

Minor issues: N/A

Nits/editorial comments:

* In Section 7 "Security Considerations", "the" is missing between
"Since" and "splicer" in the first sentence of the third paragraph.


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Matt Miller
Cisco Systems, Inc.

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