Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-6man-ndpioiana-02

Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> Mon, 30 April 2018 20:39 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-6man-ndpioiana-02
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On 01/05/2018 02:10, Ole Troan wrote:
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>> 4. Section 4 - It would be good to capitalize Standards Action, and refer to
>> RFC 8126 as reference (also to be added)
> 
> Capitalisation done.
> I ended up leaning towards not referencing 8126. As most documents with IANA considerations don't. To be consistent.

Really? As an author, I think I've always cited RFC8126 or its predecessors when
defining an assignment policy. "Standards Action" may be self-defining, but
certainly the more subtle policies like "Specification Required" need a reference.

   Brian