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Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc5764-mux-fixes-10

"Gonzalo Salgueiro (gsalguei)" <gsalguei@cisco.com> Thu, 28 July 2016 23:55 UTC

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From: "Gonzalo Salgueiro (gsalguei)" <gsalguei@cisco.com>
To: "Joel M. Halpern" <jmh@joelhalpern.com>
Thread-Topic: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc5764-mux-fixes-10
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Hi Joel - 

Thanks for your review.  Comments inline...

> On Jul 28, 2016, at 7:18 PM, Joel M. Halpern <jmh@joelhalpern.com> wrote:
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> Document: draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc5764-mux-fixes-10
>    Multiplexing Scheme Updates for Secure Real-time Transport Protocol
>        (SRTP) Extension for Datagram Transport Layer Security (DTLS)
> Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern
> Review Date: 28-July-2016
> IETF LC End Date: 2016-08-06
> IESG Telechat date: N/A
> 
> Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard.
> 
> Major issues:
> 
> Minor issues:
>    Is there any way to get clearance from pre-2008 authors to enable current copyright text to be used even though old text is copied into this document for clarity?

We tried. Dave McGrew was fine with it, but EKR thought it best to use the disclaimer.  We notified our AD (Ben Campbell) and he will be taking it up with him, if deemed necessary.

Cheers,

Gonzalo


> Nits/editorial comments:

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