Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-idr-tunnel-encaps-19

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Wed, 02 December 2020 21:37 UTC

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Gyan, thanks for your review. Keyur, thanks for your responses. I entered a No Objection ballot.

Alissa


> On Nov 13, 2020, at 4:47 PM, Gyan Mishra <hayabusagsm@gmail.com> wrote:
> 
> 
> Thank you for the responses.
> 
> I am all set for the document advancement.
> 
> Gyan
> On Fri, Nov 13, 2020 at 4:21 PM Keyur Patel <keyur@arrcus.com <mailto:keyur@arrcus.com>> wrote:
> Hi Gyan,
> 
> Thanks for the detail review of the draft. My comments are inlined #Keyur
> 
> On 10/2/20, 11:09 PM, "Gyan Mishra via Datatracker" <noreply@ietf.org <mailto:noreply@ietf.org>> wrote:
> 
>     Reviewer: Gyan Mishra
>     Review result: Ready
> 
>     I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
>     Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
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>     Document: draft-ietf-idr-tunnel-encaps-??
>     Reviewer: Gyan Mishra
>     Review Date: 2020-10-02
>     IETF LC End Date: 2020-10-01
>     IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
>     Summary:
>        This draft updates RFC 5512 is which was never used in production.
>         This document deprecates the original RFC 5512
>        Encapsulation SAFI used for GRE encapsulation type only and defined extended
>        community attributes  (which has never been used in production) , and
>        specifies semantics for the attribute when it is carried in UPDATEs of
>        certain other SAFIs.  This document adds support for additional Tunnel
>        Types, and allows a remote tunnel endpoint address to be specified for each
>        tunnel.  This document also provides support for specifying fields of any
>        inner or outer encapsulations that may be used by a particular tunnel.
> 
>     This document is well written and clearly defines all the tunnel encapsulation
>     attributes that exist today. This draft modification of the usage of the tunnel
>     encapsulation attribute is backwards compatible so does not impact the existing
>     deployments of the tunnel encapsulation types such as vxlan,vxlan GPE, NVGRE,
>     MPLS over GRE, L2TPV3.
> 
>     Major issues:
>     None
> 
>     Minor issues:
>     Is tunnel type RFC 7510 MPLS over UDP supported.  
> 
> #Keyur: Yes. Please see section 1.4 in the draft version 20 that was recently posted. https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-idr-tunnel-encaps/ <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-idr-tunnel-encaps/>
> 
> 
> Also RFC 8663 SR-MPLS over IP
>     for SRv6 and SR-MPLS interoperability where MPLS over GRE RFC 4023 is used or
>     RFC 7510 MPLS over UDP and outer encapsulation is IPv6 for SRv6 forwarding
>     plane to tunnel SR-MPLS.
> 
> #Keyur: These should be a separate document. __
> 
>     Nits/editorial comments:
>     As this update is backwards compatible to tunnel encapsulation attributes
>     deployed today is there any code upgrade for vendor implementation required now
>     for router vendors to support the new encapsulation attributes TLV and Sub TLVs
>     and extended community attributes defined with this draft.
> 
> #Keyur: As you know the tunnel encapsulation attribute itself is backward compatible with RFC5512. However as part of this document, the tunnel encapsulation attribute can be carried with set of AFI/SAFIs that are defined in this document. To make this happen the code upgrade would be needed (Please refer to section 1). 
> 
> Regards,
> Keyur
> 
> 
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