[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-faltstrom-unicode11-08

[Dan Romascanu via Datatracker <[e-mail]>]

Reviewer: Dan Romascanu
Review result: Ready with Issues

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Document: draft-faltstrom-unicode11-08
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu
Review Date: 2019-03-18
IETF LC End Date: 2019-03-05
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:

This document is Ready. However, I have signaled one minor issue in my LC
review which was not addressed in the revision, neither have I seen an answer
to the clarification that I requested (unless I missed some mail).

Major issues:

Minor issues:

(from my previous review, not addressed)

The IANA Considerations text is not clear to me.

> IANA is requested to update the IDNA Parameters registry of derived
   property values, after the expert reviewer validates that the derived
   property values are calculated correctly.

What does this exactly say? Are these recommendations for future actions, or do
they refer specifically to property values described in this document? Are the
expert reviewer validation and IDNA Parameters registry update required to be
performed prior to approval of this document?

Nits/editorial comments: