Return-Path: X-Original-To: gen-art@ietfa.amsl.com Delivered-To: gen-art@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 3E1B912018D; Mon, 14 Oct 2019 09:28:49 -0700 (PDT) X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com X-Spam-Flag: NO X-Spam-Score: -2.699 X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-2.699 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_AU=-0.1, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_LOW=-0.7, SPF_PASS=-0.001, URIBL_BLOCKED=0.001] autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no Authentication-Results: ietfa.amsl.com (amavisd-new); dkim=pass (2048-bit key) header.d=cooperw.in header.b=d/Kr8mbn; dkim=pass (2048-bit key) header.d=messagingengine.com header.b=gJd1A2/T Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id 0rb0TLXfhOfh; Mon, 14 Oct 2019 09:28:46 -0700 (PDT) Received: from out3-smtp.messagingengine.com (out3-smtp.messagingengine.com [66.111.4.27]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher AECDH-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id A89FB12007C; Mon, 14 Oct 2019 09:28:46 -0700 (PDT) Received: from compute7.internal (compute7.nyi.internal [10.202.2.47]) by mailout.nyi.internal (Postfix) with ESMTP id 6BAB72221D; Mon, 14 Oct 2019 12:28:44 -0400 (EDT) Received: from mailfrontend1 ([10.202.2.162]) by compute7.internal (MEProxy); Mon, 14 Oct 2019 12:28:44 -0400 DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=cooperw.in; h= from:message-id:content-type:mime-version:subject:date :in-reply-to:cc:to:references; s=fm1; bh=nLhyXNS0qxlGLmq3fP8Ikwj N8G0FZ2w2lG/6DB7Z0nA=; b=d/Kr8mbnPFUfVpOXxzdxoB0Nm1JDzRfDy8Cr+gj 000t89m2oE2rqdpr7BiTnq71p2e7nm+n82lgZYVYLntjFV2KDUU0wTYR+rOD1TsG jnLeTjKv5fH1qFpiYKXhCasju50B6KYw17LbVtNLOq3+r0aeyJggJPVMvE/yOne/ dfKZzDms+bg0i1dSg+B/MKTKjIBKSHqMH8RIrKL7RaGLoqenB+3nr+m6QG0QNnfk wA/MmZgg5m7m1ygBzUnHpNtGPTmkEA9C43h5A28qRkFv4Dl5Q4x9aC1JFv7rkLpf fUMYUFEXofM6NA2s0UoXLhi4Ln6I8nUORm0Bpn4J0ZZVi8g== DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d= messagingengine.com; h=cc:content-type:date:from:in-reply-to :message-id:mime-version:references:subject:to:x-me-proxy :x-me-proxy:x-me-sender:x-me-sender:x-sasl-enc; s=fm1; bh=nLhyXN S0qxlGLmq3fP8IkwjN8G0FZ2w2lG/6DB7Z0nA=; b=gJd1A2/T/iOmqNrc6vjwnU 5GN09vMuWrNhmW3XQWudJu5AEgDdMgpB1ZeYRwbp4mmy4bDm1Cvn6jUU19UGqUnL y3ZbsktXzDr+nJLYUJ1hmHc0Fh6xPVeshy1h2iKdeRen8yHam4Ki/SyA0YwQkwLZ B1NycYkySi4O+4jrr7DW23X0aOhuN4H1pcTxbZp60+opCjn6hZjcX9AOrSd4NyAB qHo/nwempdWHIC7HHkSCdd+eEXGQl3LKDTTSNKurqcXc0uNVn/2SnBkOYxvvmciO WtLt1PDdERedVAWdneIJar8fhBOguow/MgjEppZX7hKcd9uPSrcsVP/6U7bIWfMA == X-ME-Sender: X-ME-Proxy-Cause: gggruggvucftvghtrhhoucdtuddrgedufedrjedugddutddvucetufdoteggodetrfdotf fvucfrrhhofhhilhgvmecuhfgrshhtofgrihhlpdfqfgfvpdfurfetoffkrfgpnffqhgen uceurghilhhouhhtmecufedttdenucesvcftvggtihhpihgvnhhtshculddquddttddmne cujfgurhephffktgggufffjgfvfhfosegrtdhmrehhtddvnecuhfhrohhmpeetlhhishhs rgcuvehoohhpvghruceorghlihhsshgrsegtohhophgvrhifrdhinheqnecuffhomhgrih hnpehivghtfhdrohhrghenucfkphepudejfedrfeekrdduudejrdekfeenucfrrghrrghm pehmrghilhhfrhhomheprghlihhsshgrsegtohhophgvrhifrdhinhenucevlhhushhtvg hrufhiiigvpedt X-ME-Proxy: Received: from rtp-alcoop-nitro3.cisco.com (unknown [173.38.117.83]) by mail.messagingengine.com (Postfix) with ESMTPA id 5404980062; Mon, 14 Oct 2019 12:28:43 -0400 (EDT) From: Alissa Cooper Message-Id: <6E670FFC-4844-4A61-9232-C166A3AA9437@cooperw.in> Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="Apple-Mail=_958360E8-9F63-4A19-8BD2-0D781DD29465" Mime-Version: 1.0 (Mac OS X Mail 11.5 \(3445.9.1\)) Date: Mon, 14 Oct 2019 12:28:42 -0400 In-Reply-To: Cc: General Area Review Team , draft-ietf-cdni-request-routing-extensions.all@ietf.org, IETF discussion list , cdni@ietf.org To: Ori Finkelman , Dan Romascanu References: <156629218779.445.16520250622552099560@ietfa.amsl.com> X-Mailer: Apple Mail (2.3445.9.1) Archived-At: Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-cdni-request-routing-extensions-05 X-BeenThere: gen-art@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29 Precedence: list List-Id: "GEN-ART: General Area Review Team" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 14 Oct 2019 16:28:50 -0000 --Apple-Mail=_958360E8-9F63-4A19-8BD2-0D781DD29465 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Dan, thanks for your review. Ori, thanks for making the updates. I = entered a No Objection ballot. Alissa > On Aug 21, 2019, at 5:05 PM, Ori Finkelman = wrote: >=20 > Thank you Dan for your time and comments.=20 > I'll fix them for the next revision.=20 >=20 > Best regards, > Ori >=20 > On Tue, Aug 20, 2019, 12:09 Dan Romascanu via Datatracker = > wrote: > Reviewer: Dan Romascanu > Review result: Ready with Nits >=20 > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. >=20 > For more information, please see the FAQ at >=20 > >. >=20 > Document: draft-ietf-cdni-request-routing-extensions-05 > Reviewer: Dan Romascanu > Review Date: 2019-08-20 > IETF LC End Date: 2019-08-28 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat >=20 > Summary: > This document is ready from a Gen-ART perspective, with a couple of = nits which > could be fixed in the RFC Editor processing after approval Major = issues: None > Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: >=20 > 1. Several non-obvious acronyms are not expanded: FCI, FQDN > 2. Section 3 - typo in the first paragraph '...the uCDN MUST be = differnet ...' >=20 >=20 > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > Gen-art@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art --Apple-Mail=_958360E8-9F63-4A19-8BD2-0D781DD29465 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Content-Type: text/html; charset=us-ascii Dan, = thanks for your review. Ori, thanks for making the updates. I entered a = No Objection ballot.

Alissa


On Aug = 21, 2019, at 5:05 PM, Ori Finkelman <orifinkelman@gmail.com> wrote:

Thank you Dan for your time and comments. 
I'll fix them for the next = revision. 

Best regards,
Ori

On Tue, Aug = 20, 2019, 12:09 Dan Romascanu via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> = wrote:
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu
Review result: Ready with Nits

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments = just
like any other last call comments.

For more information, please see the FAQ at

<https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Document: draft-ietf-cdni-request-routing-extensions-05
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu
Review Date: 2019-08-20
IETF LC End Date: 2019-08-28
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:
This document is ready from a Gen-ART perspective, with a couple of nits = which
could be fixed in the RFC Editor processing after approval Major issues: = None
Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments:

1. Several non-obvious acronyms are not expanded: FCI, FQDN
= 2. Section 3 - typo in the first paragraph '...the uCDN MUST be = differnet ...'


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