Re: [Gen-art] [Ace] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ace-coap-est-15

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From: "Panos Kampanakis (pkampana)" <pkampana@cisco.com>
To: David Schinazi <dschinazi.ietf@gmail.com>, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [Ace] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ace-coap-est-15
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Thanks David. Done. I replaced the RFC7525 references with BCP195. 

Should I upload or will there be more Gen-ART reviews?


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Subject: [Ace] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ace-coap-est-15

Reviewer: David Schinazi
Review result: Ready with Nits

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

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Document: draft-ietf-ace-coap-est-??
Reviewer: David Schinazi
Review Date: 2019-10-05
IETF LC End Date: 2019-10-18
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: Document is clear and well-written.

Major issues: None.

Minor issues: None.

Nits/editorial comments: I believe references to RFC7525 should instead refer to it as BCP195 to point to future revisions.


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