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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-isis-extended-sequence-no-tlv-05

Uma Chunduri <uma.chunduri@ericsson.com> Mon, 13 April 2015 04:11 UTC

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From: Uma Chunduri <uma.chunduri@ericsson.com>
To: Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com>, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-isis-extended-sequence-no-tlv-05
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Hi Christer,

Thanks for your review and I shall address both comments you made below in the next  revision.

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Uma C.

From: Christer Holmberg [mailto:christer.holmberg@ericsson.com]
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Subject: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-isis-extended-sequence-no-tlv-05

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>

Document:                         draft-ietf-isis-extended-sequence-no-tlv-05

Reviewer:                           Christer Holmberg

Review Date:                     11 April 2015

IETF LC End Date:             8 April 2015

IETF Telechat Date:         N/A

Summary:        The document is well written, and almost ready for publication. I only have a couple of minor editorial comments (see below).

Major Issues: None

Minor Issues: None

Editorial nits:

Q1:        In the Introduction, please expand "IS-IS" on first occurrence (outside the Abstract)

Q2:        In the Introduction, could you add some reference to "IS-IS" on the first occurrence?

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