Return-Path: X-Original-To: gen-art@ietfa.amsl.com Delivered-To: gen-art@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id EC5361AC40D for ; Sun, 12 Apr 2015 21:11:12 -0700 (PDT) X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com X-Spam-Flag: NO X-Spam-Score: -2.301 X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-2.301 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_20=-0.001, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_MED=-2.3, SPF_PASS=-0.001] autolearn=ham Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id LtABNonb1-z3 for ; Sun, 12 Apr 2015 21:11:01 -0700 (PDT) Received: from usevmg20.ericsson.net (usevmg20.ericsson.net [198.24.6.45]) (using TLSv1 with cipher DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id AEF1C1AC40C for ; Sun, 12 Apr 2015 21:11:01 -0700 (PDT) X-AuditID: c618062d-f79686d0000030a8-8b-552aeb11f8d6 Received: from EUSAAHC004.ericsson.se (Unknown_Domain [147.117.188.84]) by usevmg20.ericsson.net (Symantec Mail Security) with SMTP id A5.61.12456.11BEA255; Mon, 13 Apr 2015 00:00:49 +0200 (CEST) Received: from EUSAAMB105.ericsson.se ([147.117.188.122]) by EUSAAHC004.ericsson.se ([147.117.188.84]) with mapi id 14.03.0210.002; Mon, 13 Apr 2015 00:10:53 -0400 From: Uma Chunduri To: Christer Holmberg , "gen-art@ietf.org" Thread-Topic: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-isis-extended-sequence-no-tlv-05 Thread-Index: AdB0XsWwYj+nmynnTU2aNg+z9+ujigBQNGlA Date: Mon, 13 Apr 2015 04:10:52 +0000 Message-ID: <1B502206DFA0C544B7A60469152008633F626278@eusaamb105.ericsson.se> References: <7594FB04B1934943A5C02806D1A2204B1D793877@ESESSMB209.ericsson.se> In-Reply-To: <7594FB04B1934943A5C02806D1A2204B1D793877@ESESSMB209.ericsson.se> Accept-Language: en-US Content-Language: en-US X-MS-Has-Attach: X-MS-TNEF-Correlator: x-originating-ip: [147.117.188.12] Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="_000_1B502206DFA0C544B7A60469152008633F626278eusaamb105erics_" MIME-Version: 1.0 X-Brightmail-Tracker: H4sIAAAAAAAAA+NgFvrBLMWRmVeSWpSXmKPExsUyuXRPiK7ga61Qg/MdChb7br5jt7j66jOL A5PHkiU/mTy+XP7MFsAUxWWTkpqTWZZapG+XwJXReVyq4IhVxZwmrgbGa8ZdjJwcEgImElNO zmaBsMUkLtxbz9bFyMUhJHCUUWLr3SOMEM5yRomj61rZQarYBPQkPk79CWaLCMRLzDq8lhmk iFmgkVGi5+8hZpCEsICXxKXHD1ggirwlGjumM0LYRhJHP1wHs1kEVCX2nv8KZvMK+Er8+nAB rFcIyO5608AEYnMK+Enc/vcJzGYEOu/7qTVgNrOAuMStJ/OZIM4WkFiy5zwzhC0q8fLxP1YI W0lizutrzBD1+RJPt/ewQewSlDg58wnLBEbRWUhGzUJSNgtJGURcR2LB7k9sELa2xLKFr5lh 7DMHHjMhiy9gZF/FyFFanFqWm25ksIkRGFXHJNh0dzDueWl5iFGAg1GJh3fBJq1QIdbEsuLK 3EOM0hwsSuK8ix4cDBESSE8sSc1OTS1ILYovKs1JLT7EyMTBKdXAGHekv9T/yHS2+bGzzgie C2/4d+JR2vbKu5N6P6wUunOg3bB2YeuvOVPlK46lZB91vtQnoFZfuJl399Jju19u2XmzP/qj 9auMEJO1X454rvlZ7PBawm3GwoDHuR5n3rwxfSX7/MCm4z4ZB92NjXp2qQU9uTy/nl9hZ478 6jcfj87XYt8iHPlB4Y8SS3FGoqEWc1FxIgCQF2FHiwIAAA== Archived-At: Cc: "draft-ietf-isis-extended-sequence-no-tlv.all@tools.ietf.org" Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-isis-extended-sequence-no-tlv-05 X-BeenThere: gen-art@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15 Precedence: list List-Id: "GEN-ART: General Area Review Team" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 13 Apr 2015 04:11:13 -0000 --_000_1B502206DFA0C544B7A60469152008633F626278eusaamb105erics_ Content-Type: text/plain; charset="us-ascii" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Hi Christer, Thanks for your review and I shall address both comments you made below in = the next revision. -- Uma C. From: Christer Holmberg [mailto:christer.holmberg@ericsson.com] Sent: Saturday, April 11, 2015 5:56 AM To: gen-art@ietf.org Cc: draft-ietf-isis-extended-sequence-no-tlv.all@tools.ietf.org Subject: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-isis-extended-sequence-no-tlv-05 I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-AR= T, please see the FAQ at Document: draft-ietf-isis-extended-sequence-no-tlv-= 05 Reviewer: Christer Holmberg Review Date: 11 April 2015 IETF LC End Date: 8 April 2015 IETF Telechat Date: N/A Summary: The document is well written, and almost ready for publicat= ion. I only have a couple of minor editorial comments (see below). Major Issues: None Minor Issues: None Editorial nits: Q1: In the Introduction, please expand "IS-IS" on first occurrence (= outside the Abstract) Q2: In the Introduction, could you add some reference to "IS-IS" on = the first occurrence? --_000_1B502206DFA0C544B7A60469152008633F626278eusaamb105erics_ Content-Type: text/html; charset="us-ascii" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable

Hi Christer,

 

Thanks for your review= and I shall address both comments you made below in the next  revisio= n.

 

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Uma C.

 

From: Christer= Holmberg [mailto:christer.holmberg@ericsson.com]
Sent: Saturday, April 11, 2015 5:56 AM
To: gen-art@ietf.org
Cc: draft-ietf-isis-extended-sequence-no-tlv.all@tools.ietf.org
Subject: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-isis-extended-sequence-no-tlv-= 05

 

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. F= or background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/are= a/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>

 

Document:       &= nbsp;           &nbs= p;     draft-ietf-isis-extended-sequence-no-tlv-05=

 

Reviewer:        =             &nb= sp;      Christer Holmberg

 

Review Date:      &nbs= p;            &= nbsp; 11 April 2015

 

IETF LC End Date:      = ;       8 April 2015

 

IETF Telechat Date:     &nb= sp;   N/A

 

Summary:        The do= cument is well written, and almost ready for publication. I only have a cou= ple of minor editorial comments (see below).     &= nbsp;        

 

Major Issues: None

 

Minor Issues: None

 

Editorial nits:

 

Q1:        In the= Introduction, please expand “IS-IS” on first occurrence (outsi= de the Abstract)

 

Q2:        In the= Introduction, could you add some reference to “IS-IS” on the f= irst occurrence?

 

 

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