[Gen-art] Gen-art telechat review of draft-ietf-dime-ovlli-09

Elwyn Davies <elwynd@dial.pipex.com> Wed, 19 August 2015 13:31 UTC

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Document: draft-ietf-dime-ovli-09.txt
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review Date: 2015/08/19
IETF LC End Date:
IESG Telechat date: 2015/08/20

Summary: Ready. Thanks for addressing my last call comments (except one 
minor change got missed - see below).  A good document.  [Apologies for 
somewhat late review - in inter-continental airport limbo.]

Major issues:
None

Minor issues:
s4.2:  I commented on the possibility of turning off an abatement 
algorithm at last call.   Having thought this through, I assume that in 
general it would be sufficient for a reacting node to stop announcing 
its capability.  If this is correct it might be worth mentioning this 
(as with changing presumably this would be an exceptional case but could 
happen).  I don't think that anything very special would have to be done 
with stateful algorithms but maybe a comment would help.

Nits/editorial comments:
s5.2.1.1:  Adding a pointer to s7.3 was discussed and agreed but hasn't 
happened.
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