[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dmarc-arc-protocol-18
Ines Robles <mariainesrobles@googlemail.com> Sat, 03 November 2018 10:49 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dmarc-arc-protocol-18
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Reviewer: Ines Robles Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-dmarc-arc-protocol-18 Reviewer: Ines Robles Review Date: 11-03-2018 IETF LC End Date: 11-06-2018 IESG Telechat date: (if known) Summary: I believe the draft is technically good. This document is well written and clear to understand. This document describes the Authenticated Received Chain (ARC) protocol, which provides an authenticated "chain of custody" for a message, allowing each entity that handles the message to see what entities handled it before, and to see what the message's authentication assessment was at each step in the handling. I like that the document mentions the available implementations. Major issues: Not found Minor issues: There is a TODO in Appendix B, so I suppose further information will be added to the draft later. Nits/editorial comments: Page 18: “ptypes” →types Page 22: “concocted” → connected? Thank you for this draft. Ines
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