[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-nottingham-rfc5785bis-08

Erik Kline <ek@google.com> Wed, 06 February 2019 07:10 UTC

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Reviewer: Erik Kline
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-nottingham-rfc5785bis-??
Reviewer: Erik Kline
Review Date: 2019-02-05
IETF LC End Date: 2019-02-05
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:

Seems generally ready to go, but I have a few questions.  I apologize if these
don't many any sense in the proper context of this document.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:

[1] I assume the URIs in 6.3 are also meant to be deleted upon publication?

[2] WRT to the final lines of 5.1:

    [a] "Replace all references to RFC 5988 in that registry have been
    replaced..." doesn't scan well, I think.

    [b] If the IANA repo in question is
    https://www.iana.org/assignments/well-known-uris/well-known-uris.xhtml, I
    don't see any mention of 5988 in there.

[3] Naive question: do we want a statement about reserving/agreeing to never
allocate "example" in the .well-known space?