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Document: draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-inter-as-topology-ext
Title: BGP-LS Extension for Inter-AS Topology Retrieval
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-inter-as-topology-ext-??9
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2026-07-01
IETF LC End Date: 2026-07-07
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:
The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC with minor nits


Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:

In section 5 second paragraph  seesection 11) should be see (section 11)
In section 4 second paragraph the use of the word “among” probably mean inside or internal