Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-george-travel-faq-03

Martin Thomson <martin.thomson@gmail.com> Thu, 05 April 2012 23:38 UTC

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-05 is good.

On 10 February 2012 10:15, Martin Thomson <martin.thomson@gmail.com> wrote:
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
>
> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
> you may receive.
>
> Document: draft-george-travel-faq-03
> Reviewer: Martin Thomson
> Review Date: 2012-02-10
> IETF LC End Date: 2012-03-06
> IESG Telechat date: ?
>
> Summary: Ready
>
> Major issues: none
>
> Minor issues: none
>
> Nits/editorial comments:
> List construction throughout is a little haphazard. Check
> capitalization in particular.
> s/Souvenier/Souvenir/