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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc7810bis-03

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Mon, 17 December 2018 20:38 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc7810bis-03
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Paul, thanks for your review. Les, thanks for your response. I entered a No Objection ballot.

Alissa

> On Dec 9, 2018, at 6:08 PM, Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) <ginsberg@cisco.com> wrote:
> 
> Paul -
> 
> Thanx for the careful review and the kind words.
> 
>   Les
> 
> 
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: Paul Kyzivat <pkyzivat@alum.mit.edu>
>> Sent: Sunday, December 09, 2018 12:06 PM
>> To: draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc7810bis.all@ietf.org
>> Cc: General Area Review Team <gen-art@ietf.org>
>> Subject: Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc7810bis-03
>> 
>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
>> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the
>> IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other
>> last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at
>> <​http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
>> 
>> Document: draft-ietf-lsr-isis-rfc7810bis-03
>> Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
>> Review Date: 2018-12-09
>> IETF LC End Date: 2018-12-12
>> IESG Telechat date: ?
>> 
>> Summary:
>> 
>> This draft is ready for publication as a Standards Track RFC.
>> 
>> Issues: None
>> 
>> It was very easy to review this document because a diff with RFC7810
>> showed me everything of note, and this was consistent with Appendix A.
>> 
>> Changing an RFC in a way that is not backwards compatible is
>> problematic, but the authors have clearly considered the issues and find
>> this the best of bad alternatives.
>> 
>> The reference to draft-ietf-idr-te-pm-bgp-14 is now out of date. I'm not
>> raising it as a nit because chasing references to drafts is futile and
>> this will be fixed by the editor.
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