[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo-18

Stewart Bryant <stewart.bryant@gmail.com> Thu, 30 November 2017 22:02 UTC

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Subject: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo-18

Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo-18
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2017-11-30
IETF LC End Date: 2017-12-11
IESG Telechat date: 2017-12-14

Summary: This document has been significantly improved by incorporating the
feedback from the specialist reviewers and by fixing the English.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments: None

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-i… Stewart Bryant