Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-pcn-cl-edge-behaviour-11.txt
Tom Taylor <tom.taylor.stds@gmail.com> Mon, 02 January 2012 14:17 UTC
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-pcn-cl-edge-behaviour-11.txt
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Thanks for the review, Brian. On the 'incomplete state machine' issue: I'll think about additional text to make sure things keep on moving along. On the matter of PRI, etc.: I was working straight from the Syslog RFC, RFC 5424. I can add text to make it clear I am referring to terminology (field names) defined in that RFC. Tom Taylor
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-pcn-cl-… Brian E Carpenter
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-pcn… Tom Taylor
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-pcn… Brian E Carpenter