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Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Wed, 20 January 2021 19:34 UTC

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From: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>
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To: Stephen Farrell <stephen.farrell@cs.tcd.ie>, Mohit Sethi <mohit.m.sethi@ericsson.com>
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Mohit, thanks for your review. Stephen, thanks for your response. I entered a Yes ballot.

Alissa

> On Nov 25, 2020, at 6:47 AM, Stephen Farrell <stephen.farrell@cs.tcd.ie> wrote:
> 
> 
> 
> On 25/11/2020 11:46, Mohit Sethi via Datatracker wrote:
>> Reviewer: Mohit Sethi
>> Review result: Ready
> 
> Thanks. Will look at those nits when next editing.
> 
> Cheers,
> S.
> 
>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
>> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
>> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
>> like any other last call comments.
>> For more information, please see the FAQ at
>> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
>> Document: draft-ietf-tls-oldversions-deprecate-09
>> Reviewer: Mohit Sethi
>> Review Date: 2020-11-25
>> IETF LC End Date: 2020-11-30
>> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
>> Summary: This document deprecates older versions of TLS and DTLS. It also
>> updates many RFCs that normatively refer to the older TLS/DTLS versions.
>> Major issues: None
>> Minor issues: None
>> Nits/editorial comments: In section 1.1, typo in "waas defined to detect".
>> Most references to RFCs are of the form "[RFC7507]". Can we change "RFC 7457
>> [RFC7457]" to "[RFC7457]" for uniformity. Similarly, perhaps you could change
>> "RFC5246 [RFC5246]" and "RFC4346 [RFC4346]" to "[RFC5246]" and "[RFC4346]".
>> In section 2 "NIST for example have provided " should be "..has provided...".
>> In section 6 "this document is called out specifically to update text
>> implementing the deprecation  recommendations of this document." I was
>> initially confused with the repeated usage of "this". Perhaps it would help to
>> be more explicit.
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