Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Review of draft-ietf-ospf-multi-instance-08

Acee Lindem <acee.lindem@ericsson.com> Wed, 18 January 2012 12:17 UTC

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From: Acee Lindem <acee.lindem@ericsson.com>
To: Pete McCann <mccap@petoni.org>
Date: Wed, 18 Jan 2012 07:17:09 -0500
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Hi Pete, 
Thanks for the review and editorial comments. These will be incorporated in the -09 version of the draft. 
Thanks,
Acee 
On Jan 18, 2012, at 4:54 AM, Pete McCann wrote:

> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
> < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
> 
> Please wait for direction from your document shepherd
> or AD before posting a new version of the draft.
> 
> Document: draft-ietf-ospf-multi-instance-08
> Reviewer: Peter McCann
> Review Date: 2012-01-18
> IETF LC End Date:
> IESG Telechat date: 2012-01-19
> 
> Summary: Ready
> 
> Major issues: None
> 
> Minor issues: None
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> 
> Section 3.2:
>   compatibility the base OSPF
> SHOULD BE:
>   compatibility with the base OSPF
> 
>   This is IPv4 instance
> SHOULD BE:
>   This IPv4 instance