Re: [Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-sidr-bgpsec-ops-12
Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net> Thu, 05 January 2017 10:58 UTC
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From: Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-sidr-bgpsec-ops-12
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Thanks for your review, Roni. > I think the document need an editorial review, a lot of text in > passive language, for example Authors — do take a note. I am posting a No Objection vote on the document in today’s IESG telechat. Jari