[Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-manet-credit-window-07
Lucy yong <lucy.yong@huawei.com> Mon, 28 November 2016 16:35 UTC
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From: Lucy yong <lucy.yong@huawei.com>
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Document: draft-ietf-manet-credit-window-07
Credit Windowing extension for DLEP
Reviewer: Lucy Yong
Review Date: 28-Nov-2016
IETF LC End Date: 28-Nov-2016
IESG Telechat date: 29-Nov-2016
Summary: This document specifies a technique for a fine-grained flow control in radio communication. It is well-written and ready for publishing. Note: 07 version is published recently and is reviewed.
Major issues: N/A
Minor issues: N/A
Nits/editorial comments:
In section 9.1, revise "If credits are to used on a destination, ...", to make it readable.
Regards,
Lucy