Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-trill-channel-tunnel-09

Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com> Tue, 05 July 2016 23:40 UTC

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From: Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 5 Jul 2016 19:40:13 -0400
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-trill-channel-tunnel-09
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Hi Peter,

Version -10 has been uploaded with the intent of resolved your GENART
review comments.

Thanks,
Donald
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On Tue, Jul 5, 2016 at 4:06 PM, Peter Yee <peter@akayla.com> wrote:
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review
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> Document: draft-ietf-trill-channel-tunnel-09
> Reviewer: Peter Yee
> Review Date: July 1, 2016
> IETF LC End Date: July  1, 2016
> IESG Telechat date: July 7, 2016
>
> Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as a Proposed
> Standard, but has some nits that should be fixed before publication. [Ready
> with nits]
>
> This draft extends TRILL RBridge Channels so that they can transmit
> additional, tunneled message types.  Security services for RBridge Channel
> messages can be provisioned via RFC 5310 authentication and/or DTLS.  The
> draft is well-written and easy to understand in the larger TRILL context.
>
> The nits noted in the Last Call review will be addressed in a new version of
> the draft, as already discussed with one of the authors.  This review is
> posted in order to make the Telechat deadline, as the date for the next
> draft is not known to this reviewer.  The previous (Last Call) review can be
> found here:
> https://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/gen-art/current/msg13423.html
>
>