Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-modern-problem-framework-03

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Thu, 22 February 2018 05:41 UTC

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From: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-modern-problem-framework-03
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Joel, thanks for your review. I suspect the controls you’re contemplating are in fact solution-dependent.

I entered a Yes ballot - glad to see this bit of work concluding.

Alissa

> On Feb 6, 2018, at 7:02 PM, Joel Halpern <jmh@joelhalpern.com> wrote:
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> Reviewer: Joel Halpern
> Review result: Ready
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> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> Document: draft-ietf-modern-problem-framework-03
> Reviewer: Joel Halpern
> Review Date: 2018-02-06
> IETF LC End Date: 2018-02-15
> IESG Telechat date: 2018-02-22
> 
> Summary: This document is ready for publication as an Informational RFC.
> 
> Major issues:
> 
> Minor issues:
>    I presume that the lack of description on how to apply controls to
>    semi-restricted or restricted data, particulalry in the distributed data
>    store case, is deliberate?  I presume that the WG intent is that this is a
>    topic to be dealt with in the solutions, not the problem statement and
>    framework?  Things are fine if that is the intent.  If the WG views this as
>    an actual useful description of how to handle those aspects, then I would
>    ask for more descriptions.
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
>     Editorial: In the definition of Credential Authority the text uses the
>     phrase "one of more" when I am pretty sure the intent is "one or more".
> 
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