[Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-roll-turnon-rfc8138-09

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From: Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com>
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

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Document: draft-ietf-roll-turnon-rfc8138-09

Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2020-08-18
IETF LC End Date: 2020-08-18
IESG Telechat date: NA


Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some comments.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
-[Page 4] Section 3:
"Section 6.3.1 of [RFC6550] defines a 3-bit Mode of Operation (MOP) in
   the DIO Base Object.  For MOP values 0 to 6, the use of compression
   depends on the "T" flag as specified in this document. A MOP value
   of 7 and above MUST use compression by default and ignore the setting
   of the "T" flag.
"

It was not clear to me at first read why "A MOP value of 7 and above MUST use compression by default and ignore the setting of the "T" flag" ?


Best Regards,
Meral
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Meral Shirazipour
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