[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-dane-smtp-with-dane-16

"Romascanu, Dan (Dan)" <dromasca@avaya.com> Wed, 06 May 2015 14:59 UTC

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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.



Document: draft-ietf-dane-smtp-with-dane-16

Reviewer: Dan Romascanu

Review Date: 5/6/15

IETF LC End Date: 5/7/15

IESG Telechat date: (if known)



Summary:



Ready with minor comments.

I liked the operational considerations section and the security consideration section - very useful in putting this work in the context of other similar contributions.



Major issues:



None.



Minor issues:



As the document uses heavily the term 'downgrade' (downgrade attack, downgrade-resistant) it would be nice to either explain or provide a reference for what it means in the context of this work.



Nits/editorial comments:



The last paragraph in section 2.2.1, page 15 has a comment marked twice by --. This may be an editorial left-over to be corrected.