Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-jimenez-p2psip-coap-reload-08

Jaime Jiménez <jaime.jimenez@ericsson.com> Tue, 05 May 2015 10:32 UTC

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Hi,

thanks for the comments, replies are inline. I will add those changes to the draft once the last call process is over.

Ciao,
- - Jaime Jimenez

> On 27 Apr 2015, at 19:07, Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com> wrote:
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>  <>I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < <>http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>>.
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> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.
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> Document:  draft-jimenez-p2psip-coap-reload-08
> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review Date:2015–4-27
> IETF LC End Date: 2015–5-13
> IESG Telechat date: 
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> Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Standard Track  RFC.
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> Major issues:
> Minor issues:
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> Nits/editorial comments:
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> Some questions about the terminology in section 3
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> Client – is this different from RFC6940, if not why repeat?
-- You are correct, it is the same, we can just add a reference to RFC6940

> Router – this is a different name for a peer? I also noticed that it is used once in the document (defining constrained node) where it does not provide any value
-- Also agree, we could simply leave it in peer.
> Proxy and Proxy node – Why do you need both terms. In section 7 it uses proxy(PN) like it is the same term.
-- This was done to differenciate between physical node and the role they play functionally. For the spec itself only the functional roles are important, the others just give a better picture of the types of nodes you can have. We could just call both Proxy Node if it helps. 
> Constrained node the last sentence “In the latter case the node is often connected to a  continuous energy power supply” it is not clear what is the latter case, also what type of node is meant. Note that there is a redundant “either a” in the previous sentence.

-- Correct it should be:
"A CN is always either a Sensor or an Actuator.  If it is an actuator, the node is often connected to a continuous energy power supply."