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Don Fedyk <dfedyk@labn.net> Tue, 16 August 2022 17:58 UTC

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From: Don Fedyk <dfedyk@labn.net>
To: Joel Halpern <jmh@joelhalpern.com>, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>
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Thanks Joel 

Yes you are correct. 

Don 


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Subject: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-yang-iptfs-06

Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review result: Ready

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

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Document: draft-ietf-ipsecme-yang-iptfs-06
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review Date: 2022-07-21
IETF LC End Date: 2022-08-04
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This document is ready for publicaiton as a Proposed standards

Major issues: N/A

Minor issues:
     I think that in augment "/nsfikels:ipsec-ikeless/nsfikels:sad/"
        + "nsfikels:sad-entry" 
     the container ipsec-stats { 
     should have, after if-feature "ipsec-stats";,
   config false;?

Nits/editorial comments: N/A

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